This is the tumblelog of Patrick Wang — consultant, entrepreneur, and graphic designer living in San Francisco. You can email me at // or use this form to contact me.Tumblr (3.0; @junesix)http://junesix.org/<img src="http://27.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_l66ufjjOOh1qz4wu5o1_500.png"/><br/><br/><p><a href="http://www.mmiinn.com/">X-tape:[hinge]</a> printed packaging tape. I could use a roll of this right now. Looks extra sturdy.</p> <p>(via <a href="http://www.yankodesign.com/2010/07/09/sealing-with-a-hinge/">yankodesign.com</a>)</p>http://junesix.org/post/863323828http://junesix.org/post/863323828Mon, 26 Jul 2010 16:26:07 -0700<p><strong>1. Write the sentence, not just the story</strong> Long ago I got a rejection from the editor of the Santa Monica Review, Jim Krusoe. It said: “Good enough story, but what’s unique about your sentences?” That was the best advice I ever got. Learn to look at your sentences, play with them, make sure there’s music, lots of edges and corners to the sounds. Read your work aloud. Read poetry aloud and try to heighten in every way your sensitivity to the sound and rhythm and shape of sentences. The music of words. I like Dylan Thomas best for this–the Ballad of the Long-Legged Bait. I also like Sexton, Eliot, and Brodsky for the poets and Durrell and Les Plesko for prose. A terrific exercise is to take a paragraph of someone’s writing who has a really strong style, and using their structure, substitute your own words for theirs, and see how they achieved their effects.</p> <p><strong>2. Pick a better verb</strong> Most people use twenty verbs to describe everything from a run in their stocking to the explosion of an atomic bomb. You know the ones: Was, did, had, made, went, looked… One-size-fits-all looks like crap on anyone. Sew yourself a custom made suit. Pick a better verb. Challenge all those verbs to really lift some weight for you.</p> <p><strong>3. Kill the cliché.</strong> When you’re writing, anything you’ve ever heard or read before is a cliché. They can be combinations of words: Cold sweat. Fire-engine red, or phrases: on the same page, level playing field, or metaphors: big as a house. So quiet you could hear a pin drop. Sometimes things themselves are cliches: fuzzy dice, pink flamingo lawn ornaments, long blonde hair. Just keep asking yourself, “Honestly, have I ever seen this before?” Even if Shakespeare wrote it, or Virginia Woolf, it’s a cliché. You’re a writer and you have to invent it from scratch, all by yourself. That’s why writing is a lot of work, and demands unflinching honesty.</p> <p><strong>4. Variety is the key.</strong> Most people write the same sentence over and over again. The same number of words–say, 8-10, or 10-12. The same sentence structure. Try to become stretchy–if you generally write 8 words, throw a 20 word sentence in there, and a few three-word shorties. If you’re generally a 20 word writer, make sure you throw in some threes, fivers and sevens, just to keep the reader from going crosseyed.</p> <p><strong>5. Explore sentences using dependent clauses.</strong> A dependent clause (a sentence fragment set off by commas, dontcha know) helps you explore your story by moving you deeper into the sentence. It allows you to stop and think harder about what you’ve already written. Often the story you’re looking for is inside the sentence. The dependent clause helps you uncover it.</p> <p><strong>6. Use the landscape.</strong> Always tell us where we are. And don’t just tell us where something is, make it pay off. Use description of landscape to help you establish the emotional tone of the scene. Keep notes of how other authors establish mood and foreshadow events by describing the world around the character. Look at the openings of Fitzgerald stories, and Graham Greene, they’re great at this.</p> <p><strong>7. Smarten up your protagonist.</strong> Your protagonist is your reader’s portal into the story. The more observant he or she can be, the more vivid will be the world you’re creating. They don’t have to be super-educated, they just have to be mentally active. Keep them looking, thinking, wondering, remembering.</p> <p><strong>8. Learn to write dialogue.</strong> This involves more than I can discuss here, but do it. Read the writers of great prose dialogue–people like Robert Stone and Joan Didion. Compression, saying as little as possible, making everything carry much more than is actually said. Conflict. Dialogue as part of an ongoing world, not just voices in a dark room. Never say the obvious. Skip the meet and greet.</p> <p><strong>9. Write in scenes.</strong> What is a scene? a) A scene starts and ends in one place at one time (the Aristotelian unities of time and place–this stuff goes waaaayyyy back). b) A scene starts in one place emotionally and ends in another place emotionally. Starts angry, ends embarrassed. Starts lovestruck, ends disgusted. c) Something happens in a scene, whereby the character cannot go back to the way things were before. Make sure to finish a scene before you go on to the next. Make something happen.</p> <p><strong>10. Torture your protagonist.</strong> The writer is both a sadist and a masochist. We create people we love, and then we torture them. The more we love them, and the more cleverly we torture them along the lines of their greatest vulnerability and fear, the better the story. Sometimes we try to protect them from getting booboos that are too big. Don’t. This is your protagonist, not your kid.</p> <p><em>Good guidelines for any type of narrative writing.</em></p> <p>(via <a href="http://latimesblogs.latimes.com/jacketcopy/2010/07/janet-fitchs-10-rules-for-writers.html">latimesblogs.latimes.com</a>)</p>http://junesix.org/post/863302165http://junesix.org/post/863302165Mon, 26 Jul 2010 16:19:00 -0700<img src="http://26.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_l66tx3X0z71qz4wu5o1_500.jpg"/><br/><br/><p><a href="http://shop.starwars.com/catalog/product.xml?topcatID=1300264;product_id=1321554;category_id=1305460">Darth Vader apron</a> - just in time for BBQ season!</p> <p>$25</p> <p>(via <a href="http://www.uncrate.com/men/gear/grilling/darth-vader-bbq-apron/">uncrate.com</a>)</p>http://junesix.org/post/863286096http://junesix.org/post/863286096Mon, 26 Jul 2010 16:15:03 -0700<object width="400" height="325"><param name="movie" value="http://www.youtube.com/v/zWY67PRLGSA&rel=0&egm=0&showinfo=0&fs=1"></param><param name="wmode" value="transparent"></param><param name="allowFullScreen" value="true"></param><embed src="http://www.youtube.com/v/zWY67PRLGSA&rel=0&egm=0&showinfo=0&fs=1" type="application/x-shockwave-flash" width="400" height="325" allowFullScreen="true" wmode="transparent"></embed></object><br/><br/><p>I need to be this excited about everything I do in life!</p> <p>(via <a href="http://blog.crzysurf.com/post/778424548/video001">crzysurf</a>)</p>http://junesix.org/post/780668032http://junesix.org/post/780668032Wed, 07 Jul 2010 03:52:47 -0700<img src="http://25.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_l44e4gpKYJ1qz4wu5o1_500.jpg"/><br/><br/><p>The palette of painter <a href="http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Georges_Seurat">Georges Seurat</a>, who is famously known for his impressionist painting, <a href="http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/A_Sunday_Afternoon_on_the_Island_of_La_Grande_Jatte">A Sunday Afternoon on the Island of La Grande Jatte</a>). True to pointillism, you can see the organization and order of his pigments, the colors kept neat and separate.</p> <p>There’s also photos of the palettes of Renoir, Degas, Delacroix, Moreau, Gaugin, and Van Gogh in this Daily Telegraph article, <a href="http://blogs.telegraph.co.uk/culture/lucydavies/100007607/why-preserve-van-goghs-palette/">“Why preserve Van Gogh’s palette?”</a>.</p> <p>(via <a href="http://kottke.org/10/06/georges-seurats-palette">kottke.org</a>)</p>http://junesix.org/post/705203075http://junesix.org/post/705203075Wed, 16 Jun 2010 11:31:28 -0700<img src="http://29.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_l41828GzRT1qz4wu5o1_500.png"/><br/><br/><p>How’s this for a coffee mug? The <a href="http://www.the-scallywags.com/">Coffee Brake Mug</a> by Scallywags mates an old school bike brake lever to a 14 oz. double-walled insulated stainless steel mug. Non-skid bottom and snug-fitting plastic lid.</p> <p>$20</p>http://junesix.org/post/699317206http://junesix.org/post/699317206Mon, 14 Jun 2010 18:27:44 -0700<img src="http://26.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_l3rmhvsc7R1qz4wu5o1_500.jpg"/><br/><br/><p>Unpeeled apple cooked sous vide by Aki Kamozawa & H. Alexander Talbot of “<a href="http://blog.ideasinfood.com/ideas_in_food/2009/09/pretty-and-pink.html">Ideas In Food</a>”.</p>http://junesix.org/post/681236614http://junesix.org/post/681236614Wed, 09 Jun 2010 14:03:31 -0700<img src="http://25.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_l3qqofIHDh1qz4wu5o1_500.jpg"/><br/><br/><p>I need these bullhorns fitted to my bike.</p> <p>Part of <a href="http://www.designkug.com/">SungKug Kim</a>’s ongoing “Bi-King” project.</p> <p>(via <a href="http://www.trackosaurusrex.com/pblog/index.php?entry=entry100517-112146">trackosaurusrex.com</a>)</p>http://junesix.org/post/679663798http://junesix.org/post/679663798Wed, 09 Jun 2010 02:36:12 -0700<img src="http://26.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_l2ygl2ncN71qb08kio1_500.jpg"/><br/><br/><p>Love driving up this street. Prob wouldn’t say the same thing if I had a manual though.</p> <p>(via <a href="http://masteryourhigh.tumblr.com/" class="tumblr_blog">masteryourhigh</a>)</p>http://junesix.org/post/679549035http://junesix.org/post/679549035Wed, 09 Jun 2010 01:35:51 -0700<img src="http://28.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_l3pzd4oN461qz4wu5o1_500.jpg"/><br/><br/><p>Normally I’m not much of an Omega guy but this one is a stunner. The <a href="http://www.omegawatches.com/press/press-release-detail/1350">Omega Seamaster Aqua Terra XXL Small Seconds</a> is a truly limited design at just 88 pieces each in 18-carat rose gold or white gold (pictured).</p> <p>The dial is made of white enamel on two levels and feature blued steel hands with their laser cut vintage Omega logos. The recessed small seconds subdial is made of applied sterling silver and adds a subtle third level to the dial. The screw-in sapphire caseback makes it possible to observe, in detail, the beauty of this fine movement.</p> <p>Movement is the OMEGA calibre 2211, an officially COSC-certified chronometer.</p> <p>(via <a href="http://www.acquiremag.com/style/watches/omega-seamaster-aqua-terra-xxl.php">acquiremag.com</a>)</p>http://junesix.org/post/678163860http://junesix.org/post/678163860Tue, 08 Jun 2010 16:46:15 -0700<img src="http://29.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_l3nnwo3wby1qz4wu5o1_500.jpg"/><br/><br/><p>I’m not one for wearing rings or jewelry but I’m really digging this <a href="http://www.digbyandiona.com/store/show/2x4R">2x4 Ring</a> by <a href="http://www.digbyandiona.com">Digby & Iona</a>.</p> <blockquote> <p><em>The 2x4 ring is painstakingly engraved with wood grain detail both inside and out, we’re especially proud of the end-grain detail.</em></p> <p><em>The ring measures 1/4” wide by just under 1/8” thick and is available in oxidized sterling, vermeil or with a diamond set into the knot.</em></p> </blockquote> <p>$140 for the oxidized sterling ring (shown)</p> <p>(via <a href="http://abrentisart.wordpress.com/2010/06/01/2x4-ring/">abrentisart.wordpress.com</a>)</p>http://junesix.org/post/673674906http://junesix.org/post/673674906Mon, 07 Jun 2010 10:43:00 -0700<img src="http://30.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_l3hvf9WELX1qz4wu5o1_500.png"/><br/><br/><p>Looks like Urban Outfitters has jumped onto the chambray ties bandwagon. If you don’t own any chambray, the alternating white and colored weave gives the cotton material a soft, textured color and looks great paired with denim. <a href="http://www.urbanoutfitters.com/urban/catalog/productdetail.jsp?id=18192500">Urban Outfitters</a> has them available in blue, grey, or purple (violet) at a very affordable $19.</p>http://junesix.org/post/663490632http://junesix.org/post/663490632Fri, 04 Jun 2010 07:40:21 -0700<img src="http://27.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_l3hu4hArZi1qz4wu5o1_500.jpg"/><br/><br/><p>In a departure from the usual, GQ has a <a href="http://www.gq.com/style/wear-it-now/201006/xavier-samuel-models-cotton-suits-under-four-hundred-dollars#slide=1">17-page pictorial style guide</a> featuring affordable suits and combinations under $400. Some great selections in a wide variety of suits by J. Crew, Calvin Klein, Uniqlo, DKNY, and more.</p>http://junesix.org/post/663426138http://junesix.org/post/663426138Fri, 04 Jun 2010 07:12:16 -0700<img src="http://30.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_l3em84xsx31qz4wu5o1_500.jpg"/><br/><br/><p>Small German bike manufacturer, RETROVELO, has come up with an ingenious work bag for your bike. The full-leatre <a href="http://www.retrovelo.de/framebag.html">Frame Bag</a>fits over horizontal bike top tubes and is fastened with two belt hooks and a TENAX button on the seat tube. Comes in brown or black.</p> <p>$499</p> <p>(via <a href="http://www.notcot.org/post/30878/">notcot.org</a>)</p>http://junesix.org/post/657546780http://junesix.org/post/657546780Wed, 02 Jun 2010 13:28:00 -0700<img src="http://30.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_l34wng2T7C1qz4wu5o1_400.jpg"/><br/><br/><p>The <a href="http://www.herringshoes.co.uk/product-info.php?brandID=6&catID=43&shoeID=3615&selectedSizeID=0&selectedFitID=0">Shakespeare double monk strap</a> by Herring is just gorgeous. Made from calfskin leather and traditional Goodyear welted leather soles with toe cap stitching. How much? A very economical $237 imported from the UK.</p> <p>Available in black or dark brown.</p> <p>(via <a href="http://sartoriallyinclined.blogspot.com/2010/05/herring-double-monks.html">sartoriallyinclined.blogspot.com</a>)</p>http://junesix.org/post/640874106http://junesix.org/post/640874106Fri, 28 May 2010 07:38:00 -0700<img src="http://25.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_l1eat8FzNa1qz4wu5o1_500.jpg"/><br/><br/><p><em><a href="http://startfinish.sspeier.com/?p=443">George Costanza: Heinous or hip?</a></em> by Start & Finish</p> <p>(via <a href="http://www.gq.com/style/blogs/the-gq-eye/2010/04/george-costanza-fashion-icon.html">gq.com</a>)</p>http://junesix.org/post/546141044http://junesix.org/post/546141044Sat, 24 Apr 2010 12:15:08 -0700<img src="http://25.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_l18n1gvrd51qz4wu5o1_500.png"/><br/><br/><p>Beautiful <a href="http://thesearethings.bigcartel.com/product/world-map-aqua">world map</a> by These Are Things for the home.</p> <blockquote> <p><em>The original modern world map. Simplified geography with country borders, latitude and longitude lines, and overprinted compass rose. A selection of countries and oceans are labeled in burgundy.</em></p> <p><em>Silkscreened by hand in four colors on Cougar Natural stock. 30” x 20”.</em></p> </blockquote> <p>$60</p> <p>(via <a href="http://www.gq.com/style/blogs/the-gq-eye/2010/04/map-it-out.html">gq.com</a>)</p>http://junesix.org/post/538677330http://junesix.org/post/538677330Wed, 21 Apr 2010 10:53:00 -0700“We try to make the kids feel ownership in the company. Boys hate to smile. It’s not macho. And it’s definitely not macho to clean a bathroom. But if the [weekly safety] auditor walks in and the bathroom isn’t clean, that crew just lost money [$1,000 every week for the top 200 stores]. Next thing he knows, the guy who was supposed to clean the bathroom has toilet paper all over his car and a potato in his tailpipe.”<br/><br/> - <em>Jerry Murrell, CEO of Five Guys Burgers in <a href="http://www.inc.com/magazine/20100401/jerry-murrell-five-guys-burgers-and-fries.html">Inc.com article</a></em>http://junesix.org/post/521060452http://junesix.org/post/521060452Wed, 14 Apr 2010 08:57:20 -0700“The idea of a retirement age was invented by Otto von Bismarck in the 1880s, when as chancellor of Germany he needed a starting age for paying war pensions. He chose the age of 65 because that was typically when ex-soldiers died.”<br/><br/> - <em>Excerpted from <em><strong><a href="http://www.newscientist.com/article/mg20627550.100-the-shock-of-the-old-welcome-to-the-elderly-age.html?full=true">The shock of the old: Welcome to the elderly age</a></strong></em> (via <a href="http://kottke.org/10/04/the-old-age-age">kottke.org</a>)</em>http://junesix.org/post/509151499http://junesix.org/post/509151499Fri, 09 Apr 2010 15:30:00 -0700“A slim cut sleeve drops 10 pounds off any guy in a suit.”<br/><br/> - <em>Scott Schuman, <em><a href="http://thesartorialist.blogspot.com/2010/04/on-streetknit-jacket-florence.html">The Sartorialist</a></em></em>http://junesix.org/post/503664392http://junesix.org/post/503664392Wed, 07 Apr 2010 11:11:00 -0700